I am trying to tell the story of someone who is locked inside and needs to get out and enjoy nature. I try to show these steps with the dying plant, peephole, money, shoes, and nature views all the way to the sunset.
Enjoy! :)
Wednesday, July 27, 2016
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These are 10 photos I am considering using to tell my photo story.
I am trying to tell the story of someone who is locked inside and needs to get out and enjoy nature. I try to show these steps with the dying plant, peephole, money, shoes, and nature views all the way to the sunset.
Enjoy! :)
I am trying to tell the story of someone who is locked inside and needs to get out and enjoy nature. I try to show these steps with the dying plant, peephole, money, shoes, and nature views all the way to the sunset.
Enjoy! :)
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Great photos. I'm looking forward to seeing how the story plays out.
ReplyDeleteMerideth, please provide some constructive criticism that will help Maggie create an awesome photostory.
DeleteMaybe add a picture of a door or window with the person using their hands to open it. Or have a picture of tools trying to open the door or window.
ReplyDeleteIt starts out good but the next set of pictures with the pennies and boots don't really tell me about someone who is trapped. You have a good start but you need more expression in being trapped. You want to have an ending where it is clear they are free kind of like what you are doing with the beach waves and the waterfall. You're getting there.
ReplyDeleteMaybe a picture of hands tied together and a picture of the hands breaking free. Something so I know the person is locked up.
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